Draft Video
Draft Ident Videos
This is the current draft of both of my idents
Currently I am editing and changing some of the shots to make it link better with the overall storyline of both idents.
What I find wrong in the first ident is where a character is seen sitting down facing forward, it does not really explain what's happening and doesn't join smoothly with the rest of the footage. My initial thought filming this was to have a few cuts of a person relaxing while another character is being chased to the building. In order to make the scene link I tried to implement a ringing bell sound effect, where the person sitting down goes to answer, and end up both being chased by the figure in the back, however it makes the scene more questionable, as both characters instantly run when the door was opened, this was a mistake on my end as I did not properly explain the shot to the actors playing the characters. I improvised and instead used that shot again as the person being chased by the figure in the back, and edited out a portion of the footage to make it connect.
Within the second ident draft I found that when increasing the volume there was too much noise found in the last scene, and did not link with the rest of the audio as I intended. The first scene also did not link with the rest of the scenes as it was actually meant to be used for my first ident. I am going to edit this out as I finish off my idents
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